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About Me Premium Member Wannabe Novelist Frankie Drew19/Female/United Kingdom Recent Activity Deviant for 3 Years
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Softly, Softly

The beginnings of a short play.

I get like this in the early hours

Fri Jun 12, 2009, 4:02 AM


Current Forum Thread

I haven't written a journal entry in nearly a year. I wasn't even a student when I wrote my last entry and now my first year is over. The abandonment is mainly due to facebook. I've gotten scummier, and lazier and I lost seven or eight pounds, and then gained it again, and now I think I may have lost have couple more but that's only due to it being the end of term and I've run out of all food that isn't jacket potatoes and baked beans, and I'm getting bored of them. My English Course has been very good. Guess what me and Daniel Radcliffe have in common? We both spend all our money on books. But he is one of the richest nineteen year olds in the world, so it probably matters less to him, he's probably not up to his overdraft limit, he probably doesn't need an overdraft. Definitely I'd say.

Okay so I feel like I've had an epiphany lately, but first, my final piece for creative writing is up on here, it's a 2000 word short story, but I don't think I actually managed to reach 2000 words, but no-one seemed to notice, and it's less for you to strain your eyes at so you should check it out, it's called This Rabbit Died Running. Also I uploaded a short prose brain sneeze called Stadium on here a little while ago that I'd quite like feedback on too, I'm more unsure about it, maybe it should be put in scraps? Opinions rule. I don't know if anyone is really interested in Softly, Softly anymore. I'm starting a writing for the stage and screen module in the autumn so I imagine I'll work on it a bit more then!

Back to the ephiphany, a little while ago I wrote Autumn, an extract from something that's hardly been written down at all since I was about thirteen or fourteen and has been in my head for about a decade. I think maybe finally I've found a way it can work and maybe I'm ready to start writing it. I would love opinions on this piece, even though it is ridiculously out of context- I just want to know how the third person narrative (which I never EVER use) is looking, if it's working, whether I'm doing okay with dialogue. And maybe if I submit more in the series (I don't have a title at all), you could help with that too?

I am asking a lot of nobody. It reminds me of that poem, as I was going up the stair...


This Rabbit Died Running

Stadium

Autumn


I know it's shameless but if you give me a helpful or constructive in any way comment I will definitely check out your gallery and do the same, because those are my favourite kind of comments.


What a long journal entry for someone who has been awol for so long. OH ALSO. I need to feature new people here, It will most probably be lit pieces so if you have anything good let me know.

Skin by =pica-ae

  • Mood: Optimism
  • Listening to: Set the Dark on Fire by Turin Brakes
  • Reading: Company of Liars by Karen Maitland
  • Eating: Jacket Potatoes. So many.

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Frankie of the hills is a very stupid name. I don't live near any hills and I don't really like hills. But I do like high places.

I want to write something really long, with lots of guilt in it.

My favourite Harry Potter character used to be Hermione, and now it's Sirius Black. I think that says something.

Devious Info

  • Current Residence: we'll say london.
  • Interests: smoky lazy shameful things. thinking about writing more than I actually write.
  • Favourite movie: Breakfast at Tiffanys, Amelie, Star Wars, The Royal Tenenbaums, I'm not there, Withnail and I.
  • Favourite band or musician: Modest Mouse, Manchester Orchestra, Maximo Park, David Bowie, The Cure, Kate Bush, Led Zeppelin.
  • Favourite poet or writer: Shakespeare, Jonothan Safran Foer, Dickens, Virginia Woolf, T.S Eliot, James Joyce, G G Marquez.
  • Tools of the Trade: camel blue.

Comments


:icongerre:
I know it was a while ago, but thanks so much for the watch and the favourite! :hug:
:iconladylincoln:
Hello there, Frankie.

I hope this little note finds you well today.

:heart:

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:icontetemeko:
You gallery is beautiful, and we share quite a few favorite authors. I think I must watch you, now.

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:iconloneravenphotography:
i like your work, you have a great way with words and wonderful imagination. :)

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:iconfrankieofthehills:
gosh that's so lovely, thankyou :heart:

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:iconloneravenphotography:
no problem keep up the amazing work, ill be watching lol :P

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:iconthecritiquebox:
Thanks for your support :)
:iconbugsymoron:
Thanks muchly for the :+fav: frankie, much appreciated:aww:
Have a beautiful day :heart:

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:typerhappy:

This guy is simply TOO awesome--> ~whalelova
:iconladylincoln:
Glad to see a lovely and friendly face on my vistors list today!

:icondarkmarek:

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:iconfrankieofthehills:
oh thankyou so much ha. I haven't been on deviant art for so long because of university and exams and what not and I was convinced that everyone would have forgotten all about me, so your comment has really made my day :)

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~cheramyn

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